She Reads Too Much

I just made a tentacle shelf.



What has this world come to?

Group read with the Weird Shit Group.





I was looking for some hawt pr0n with tentacle sex.





What I actually got was a well written plot summary and/or notes. To say this story was too short is an epic understatement. There was so much unrealized potential here I wanted to scream. I wanted to know more about the actual tentacle monster, I means it seems to me they only came out when he was aroused? Fascinating.

Why did his parents leave?

Where was Ankit all those years?

If he's not going to do the capture thing what will he do?

Where was the simmering tension? Why didn't Ankit get on his kness and beg? Why was there NOT ENOUGH DETAIL IN THE SEX?

So many unanswered questions I was left feeling like I read a proposal for a story, with a sample, rather than the whole story.

If it was fully fleshed out and longer the rating would have been much higher.

So, weird but not shit.