Another solidly okay good. While there was nothing horrible wrong, the things that did bother me kept the rating from being higher.
There were, to me, medical inconsistencies. Lucas' physical behavior was inconsistent with his injuries and it really frustrated me.
The I love you happened too quickly.
Lucas overreacted to Declan's actions as a police officer.
Mack returning Declan to Lucas' case rang as wrong and poor police procedure.
The forgiveness was too quick - given the overreaction that caused the separation.
The overall timing of the storyline just seemed off.
That being said I did read the whole thing and I did buy the HEA. I liked Declan as well.